tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15182217.post8298520673284496591..comments2024-03-25T10:13:31.176+05:30Comments on रचनाकार: कहानी // खालीपन // आभा सिंहरवि रतलामीhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07878583588296216848noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15182217.post-79504517758492942092018-06-05T20:01:19.543+05:302018-06-05T20:01:19.543+05:30Character development can be made better and also ...Character development can be made better and also when you describe the environment, choose your words and metaphors wisely. it is not necessary to be poetic at everything you write in a story. You have got the potential.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com